刚写的一首歌曲《We Need No War》

dcvalentine

听听，和看了MJ的一些关于写和平战争的歌和事，自己也有点感想了，就写了一首，不好大家别丢我哦，呵呵！你会听到一丝迈迈的感觉的 呵呵 [mp=500,70,1]http://www.ycstar.com/wao/upload1/2004/7/13/1089721006078.mp3[/mp]

dcvalentine

可能有语法错误啊，请英语好的修改一下啦^_^ We Need No War 词曲：A-Tine(dcvalentine) 2004.07.12~13 你们无休止的斗争 到底带来了些什么 是幸福的微笑 还是悲伤的泪水 有多少孩子在哭泣 有多少亲人在离去 只有默默的祈祷 We Need No War Too Late, The World Was Full Of Scars We Don't Know Where Can We Live And We Don't Know Who Could Tell Me When I Look Into The Sky, It Will Remind Me To Sing For Everyone Who Was Ciyin', For The War You Always Fight For Your Money You Always Fight For Your Right You Always Play In The Garden Never Take Care Of Refugees There Are So Many People Dyin' There Are So Many Babies Cryin' We Wanna Wanna Wanna Scream We Need No War [Rap] How Many People Around The World Live In Happiness Everyday So Many People Around The World Live In Sadness Everyday How Much Happiness In The World Belong To Us Do You Know So Much Sadness In The World Belong To Us And I Know Not Too Late, If You Love Yourself The Same Please Stop From Destroying Our Family When I Look Into The Sky, It Will Remind Me To Sing For Everyone Who Was Ciyin', For The War You Always Fight For Your Money You Always Fight For Your Right You Always Play In The Garden Never Take Care Of Refugees There Are So Many People Dyin' There Are So Many Babies Cryin' We Wanna Wanna Wanna Scream We Need No War *2 Woo~ Woo~ Woo~ Woo~ Let Us Sing The Song Together Let Us Love Each Other Let Us Build The World To Make A Beautiful Tomorrow There Are So Many People Smilin' There Are So Many Babies Singin' Never Never Never Say What Is The War We Need No War

[此贴子已经被作者于2004-7-14 14:54:25编辑过]

寒

能不能顺便提供歌词？^0^在下认为有几点不足：气息不是很稳定；发音不是很清晰；配乐不太好，有点单调；最后的和声有点乱恩~~还很不错的~~~声音很纯呢

Aline

楼主不错啊~~`加油~~~~8过~~~觉得不大象迈迈的风格啊~~~

dcvalentine

以下是引用Aline在2004-7-14 10:41:57的发言： 楼主不错啊~~`加油~~~~ 8过~~~觉得不大象迈迈的风格啊~~~

我只是高潮和结尾的地方模仿了一下 呵呵^_^

nicolebt

配乐里好多不和谐音～～唱的忽悠忽悠的～～ 支持原创～！！！！