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发表于 2013-11-18 12:28:38 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
本帖最后由 我爱你的短泡面- 于 2013-11-18 12:29 编辑

     班上英语老师在星期三的时候有一节公开课..这一章正好学到Music老师就选了我让我上去演讲My Favorite Singer果断想到迈!!!!QAQ
     楼主泡面君目前初二瞬间鸡冻傻了不知道怎么编排结构了求助啊啊求助!!!QAQ
     好难得的机会不想搞砸所以就来CN求救了啊啊啊迈亲们都是好人!QAQ
     用的词汇最好简单一些不要超过初二的水平明天要拿给老师过目了..QAQ
     依旧好鸡冻啊啊啊迈亲们帮帮我!QAQ
     THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!QAQ


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发表于 2013-11-18 12:47:46 | 显示全部楼层
没有经验,无法帮助,  只是来顶一下

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=-= 还是要谢谢亲~  发表于 2013-11-18 17:25
Michael Jackson
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发表于 2013-11-18 13:20:04 | 显示全部楼层
结构上我认为可以这么写:
想想标题,可以先简单介绍下迈:出生、死亡、著名歌曲和舞蹈有哪些。
跳入重点,我为什么喜欢迈??帅,善良,歌曲动听。如果时间允许可以举一两个例子。
最后来个霸气滴收尾:抒发下感情咯~迈克尔的才华深受我的尊敬和喜爱。
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发表于 2013-11-18 16:09:23 | 显示全部楼层
侧重点迈扣的慈善,无私,伟大。他对这个世界的帮助。再来音乐,舞蹈,成就。他对这个世界的贡献
皮皮爱迈永无止境
精神不死,迈神永生

迈古超今,迈越常流

迈到永恒,迈向成功
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发表于 2013-11-18 18:51:11 | 显示全部楼层
My favourite singer is Michael Jackson.  He was born on August 29, 1958 in Garry Indiana, America. He died on  June 25, 2009 in Los Angeles. He was preparing for a sold out concert “This is it” which should suppose be held in London before his death. I think “This is it” killed him because he had to perform 50 concerts, but he was 50 years old then. Michael was a perfectionist,  so I believe he died of tiredness and stress.  A few days after June 25, 2009  there was a tribute television show of Michael Jackson. That was the first time I knew Michael. I immediately fell in love with his songs and dance such as Billie Jean, Thriller, Beat It, Black And White and so on.  I beg mum to buy the DVD of any Michael's live concert for me. Mum agreed and bought me his DVD of  Bucharest live show 1992. I quickly put it in my DVD recorder, watched it again and again. I was deeply attracted to him. I  went research on his songs and dance moves. My favourite Michael's dance moves are moonwalk and toe stand. Moonwalk is magical and I am amazed by it. I went on Yotube to search more songs by him everyday as his songs can make me happy.  I started to watch Michael’s doccumentary and knew  more about him when I was secondary one. Michael was a childlike person just like me. He loved children and did many charities for poor children in the orphanage. He won the most charities supported by a pop star in the Guinness Book of  World Records. I was very angry and sad when I heard that 2 children charged him as child abuse, one was in 1993 and the other one was in 2003. Michael is an innocent man, he never harmed  any children. Michael was a hardworking person and made many awesome musical productions including songs, music videos and live concerts. He was known as King of  Pop all over the world. No one will ever be like Michael and no one will ever beat him, he was an unique, wonderful, loving, gorgeous, kind and much much more human being. Michael is my favorite singer always regardless of  what anybody talks negative about him. I love Michael Jackson forever and ever!
Love is better than anger. Hope is better than fear. Optimism is better than despair. So let us be loving, hopeful and optimistic.            -----Jack Layton
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发表于 2013-11-19 13:38:43 | 显示全部楼层
楼上的好详细呢
           以前很怕面对死亡,但现在不再怕了,如果我们能相遇,请允许我在背后抱着你
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发表于 2013-11-19 19:44:49 | 显示全部楼层
哈哈,我和LZ有相同的经历啊,我初四了,英语很好,也在初二的时候演讲了My favourite singer 也演讲了迈,很成功啊
我一定要把Dangerous和Billie Jean学好
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发表于 2013-11-19 20:43:35 | 显示全部楼层
李筱yoyo 发表于 2013-11-19 13:38
楼上的好详细呢

我是新来的,上个月才加入到这里的MJ大家庭。亲,你知道吗?我就是看到你的Signature立马决定注册,成为这里的一份子,你的Signature写得太太太太太太好了,当下把我看哭了••••••你道出了我的心声••••••谢谢你••••••
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发表于 2013-11-20 13:00:38 | 显示全部楼层
厉害,大家都很有才。
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发表于 2013-12-11 09:46:56 | 显示全部楼层
JovineJackson 发表于 2013-11-19 20:43
我是新来的,上个月才加入到这里的MJ大家庭。亲,你知道吗?我就是看到你的Signature立马决定注册,成为这 ...

别那么客气 亲
           以前很怕面对死亡,但现在不再怕了,如果我们能相遇,请允许我在背后抱着你
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